I chose to handle those sources for my "Positive posts" is because we all grow from certain life styles we have lived. I am one of the few who actually want to take the time and relate to other life styles but in a way I could explain myself. We all lived a situation where it was the down fall of the year, or the golden age of your time yet.
I still learn about what I go through, but as I blog, why not share a thought or three while my possibilities are crawls to a stepping stone. I live to see one another relate but in ways we can smile and agree to. Being sad makes the world sad inside. I rather we all look forward, because it is fact that others have it better.
We learn from ourselves first, but see what others do what's said and done. I do not have a problem with making mistakes, that is what makes us better. The dimmer the room is the brighter the sun will be the next day. I cannot say it's the deal for everyone, we all just have to get ourselves in order to be that better person.
Expand these posts. At one point, you state, "We all lived a situation where it was the down fall of the year, or the golden age of your time yet." But I honestly don't know what that means. Are you saying every reader has lived through "the downfall of the year"? What does that actually mean? What's the golden age of your/our time?
ReplyDeleteYou know what you mean to say. It's all in your mind and it motivates you to write about positivity. But the concepts are not fully realized here yet. Where are the specific details to support these points? You start off by talking about relating to other lifestyles, but I see no actual discussion of other lifestyles, or get to know your lifestyle.
Remember: the most important thing you can do here is make concrete your ideas. Translate them from your mind and into a text that readers can really engage in/with and find common ground. Come see me if you want to work on this together!